We had to describe Alma's apperance we had to include adjectives/describing words
the hard thing was getting ideas i also couldnt write while miss kaye was talking witch was annoying
i enjoyed editing and fixing up my work next time i would have wrote more words down and stayed on task i also would have changed the coulor of the text i didnt think about that
by Jack
Hi Jack
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your writing that you have posted all about Alma. You have described her well.
I do agree with you, I also though that Alma was a very brave little girl. I am not sure I would have gone into the shop at the end.
It is great to see you posting on your blog Jack!
Well done, keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.
Until next time
Mrs Costello :)